Talk:Ed Carter/@comment-74.105.229.91-20190910011403

Hi everyone! Overall, I want to talk about a ship with Ed. I don't see the Maxie thing working out (I ship her with Blue), nor do I see him with Brooke (as I didn't like Brook much in the beginning, thought her character personality grows tremendously. But, she left a bad note on me). I agree with those who say that Ed needed a better girlfriend character to see him as he truely was. I took this into my own time to write a fan-fiction, including a new character. Here's a shortened version on how I created it: Kathleen was part of the Waitrose group. Though Arran seems to have a romantic interest in Maxie, I thought it would make the conflict even more interesting if there was more to it. Kathleen and Arran we're already dating before the disaster, and when it struck, they met Maxie and got the group together (as the three of them). Though Maxie still is second-in-command, Kathleen was more of a mother and care taker of the children of the Waitrose group (in the Enemy, when Small Sam was taken, it would have had KATHLEEN breaking down, instead of MAXIE). Arran, as the book continues on, figures he has feelings for Maxie as well, but feels he cannot break up with Kathleen (as she is sensitive, and he does overall love her too). Maxie has feelings for Arran, but often feels angry/jealous of Kathleen for being such a big person (his girlfriend) in Arran's life. Kathleen barely notices this is going on until later, after the attack (where Deke dies), where she starts to suspect Maxie has feelings for Arran. When Jester comes and offers to go to the Palace, Kathleen doesn't trust him at first, and confides in Arran, but later changes her decision for the sake of the group. When Arran dies, Maxie and Kathleen end up arguing, both hurt by his death, and this confirms Kathleen's thought of their romantic intrests in one another. They end up somewhat forgiving one another (in some way), and carry on the journey. Once the group reaches the palace, and meet David, he seems to have a bit of romantic interest in her (though, he also has one for Nicola which is explained in The Fear), and later when Maxie and Blue get captured, Kathleen finds out and ends up making a deal with David. She would stay at the Palace if he would allow them to go (which was a bit cheesy, on my part, but it lets the rest of my fan fiction flow). This adds to how the group escaped the Palace. AND THAT would be the new character in THE ENEMY. (TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! I'm only writing the fanfiction for fun, adding and taking out plots, characters, settings, and parts, and just writing little snipets of the book! I suggest doing it as well.)