Talk:Ed Carter/@comment-74.105.229.91-20190910011403/@comment-74.105.229.91-20190910012923

Alright, I know this is super long again, but hi! It's the same fan-fiction writer as before, back with parts of another plot that may happen (or hopefully had happened, not sure what book it would have though). Kathleen ends up escaping eventually, when noticing David is focused on teh escaped royals, and he let his guard down. She goes out on her own, and fends for herself. She heard of a group at the Tower Of London, and using a map, she slowly heads her way there. She ends up meeting a small group of kids, helping her on the way there. Kathleen ends up getting to the Tower (after Small Sam went, of course), and gets introduced to Ed and Jordan, the "leaders" at that point. 'This is where my plot for Ed having another romantic interest comes in. 'Kathleen explains what happened over at The Palace, and gets reunited with Small Sam (she thought he was dead, so this would have been a heart touching reunion). Sam, of course, asks where Ella is, and she explains she doesn't know for sure (which sparks up when Sam wants to search for her). As a tiny bit of time passes, Ed ends up having feelings for her, but worries she doesn't feel the same back (because he is self concious of his scar in general). As time moves on, the feeling grows mutual, and by the time the later books in the series arrive, they end up falling in love (so this would be instead of Brooke), and they both end up living in the end.

I know this is super long, and needs to be super revised, but many people's comments included that they wanted someone better for Ed. I came up with this character a while back, and started writing after I read the Enemy. I read the rest of the series, and decided (for fun :D) to go back, and start the fanfiction again. I am also rereading the series, and taking notes of everything, so I can advance on this. Fanfiction writing is really fun, and I totally suggest it! Annnnnd here's a little extra something:

Kathleen Character Chart: Appearance: A shorter girl, with long light hair, fair skin, and duller blue eyes. She is around 5 4" in height, and has a slim figure. She is quite beautiful in general. Personality: She has a very motherly type personality, kind and caring. She is also a strong fighter when she needs to be, and very resistant to those she can't trust. She will do anything for those she trusts and/or loves. She can be quiet at times.

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